Thursday, 26 January 2012

A Dove


a dove which was lone but strong
wondering what had gone wrong
as he flew distances that were long
but he could not figure out 
why no one came along
because he sang a tune of a simplistic song
but he wanted others to play along 
but no one came along
and he flew continuously  wondering why no one came along.

Shwetank
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2 comments:

  1. Literature Club26 January 2012 at 21:29

    nyc sounds like rabindranath tagores poem

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  2. geetika30 January 2012 at 03:09

    shwetank i quite liked the first four lines..but later you seem to sacrifice the thought for the sake of rhyme..it is a beautiful thought..let it grow without bindings

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