there have been many roses since time
never have i seen a rose that is so kind
when i saw you for the first time,I was in a state of sublime
the shades of laughter,happiness and prime
in a state of joy I was,and there were certain thoughts I wanted to align
unable to express,responsiveness seemed blind
expressions seemed refined,from the beauty of the divine
a thought i was lost in,when you were not around
I had a feeling,you could be found
where others frown,a hope I had that was profound
where others fail,i found a way
but not in this world it was,it was in a world where dreams sail
and my thoughts were eager like a blue whale,so i followed the trail
gone was the fear,and motive was clear
my dear,wait I would for years
ready I was,to make you near
without fear,or tears
Shwetank
"where others fail,i found a way"..beautifully optimistic...your expression is profound only i wish it wouldn't rhyme so much...please try your hand at writing blank verse
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